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Nov. 20 Office poem

Very drained and out of ideas today! Placeholder plea.CasualtyOver the following days the details made the rounds he’d locked the door the police said, no question on the cause of death he came in...

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Trying to decide whether the penultimate stanza should be the last. But then the last one really twists the knife, doesn't it?!

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I like it as is, I think, and far more complete than a placeholder in my opinion. he made a craft of it - is a great line

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yeah- my fave as well he’d made a craft of it with cablesI see a book in office poems.

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Yes, that's the way to do it:he came in after the cleaning ladies

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Reminds me of Lane in Mad Men, a passion of mine. Just exactly how he offed himself, so shocking I thought about it for days.

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I agree a book of office poems is a great idea. If you decide to make it an anthology, let me know! I was officed for decades.

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A lot of us still are. Yeah, Sarah, why don't you compile one?

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I'm mega-officed. 9-10-11 hours a day. Some wonderful colleagues and plenty of bossy big egos. This really happened too. I don't know why.

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god, that's sad!!!

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A boy who worked in an office I managed once jumped to his death in one of Ithaca's famous gorges. It was a year or more until the office Goodness recovered.

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that is rough.

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There is a book of office poems. Debra Garrison? --I should remember. I had it out of the library for months. "Please Fire Me" was the title of one poem. Gotta love that. Anyhow, this is wonderful....

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This is a placeholder?  Jeesh!  Loved the ending.  And the idea of office poems is terrific!  Makes me think of Dilbert.  All those people together, yet so separate.

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